About my Explanation Writing.

Today I will be blogging about what I will be writing for my explanation writing. Our topic for writing is 'A place of Whanaungatanga.'
My title is "Why do we build positive relationships at school?" I am working on my 2nd paragraph and leading onto my 3rd paragraph. One thing that was challenging was trying to figure out a title for my writing.
One of my main important thing was to figure out how to start off my writing so that I can improve on getting my writing skills on. I am really enjoying my topic of writing and I hope I improve on finishing it off this term some day.
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My Free Writing 2016

Hi, here is my Free Writing from this Week 1 2016. It is about The Soldiers at War, how they fought for our lives. WE WILL REMEMBER THEM!!! Hope you enjoy.

Brothers in the trenches shells falling from the sky, blood everywhere, everywhere they go blood following the soldiers. Nowhere to go, shooting everywhere, shells killing soldiers from underneath them. Soldiers camouflage in brushes and grounds, soldiers yelling at their team's, guns shooting instantly everywhere. Nowhere to hide, enemies raiding their side. Poppies growing, soldiers dying on the dirt mudding and yucky getting all dirty, not a single word they say. Feeling pain on their, knees,legs, shoulders, arms, feet, face and head. Getting ready to shoot the bad soldiers never stopping. Leader “ GET READY WE ARE GOING TO FIRE ON THE COUNT OF 3, 1, 2,3… FIRE!!!.” All guns shooting their bullet’s  at No-man’s Land. Never stop fighting, keep on going… Suddenly… DEAD.  Crosses been put up no more War, poppies blow between the crosses and poppies flying in the air. We will remember them. War just stop. They will be loved and will be loved always and forever.

Whanau Conference 2016

Hi, here is my Whanau Conference for 2016 I am working hard to reach up to L4 I am reading more book and writing more interesting stories so I can be a L4.

My Emotional Poem 2016

Hi, here is my Emotional Poem this year and the feeling Colours are Black and Red - Death. Here it is, I hope you like it. 

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Helen's What I Have Done At Home W1T2 2015.

Hi, here is my What I Have Done At Home on Google Slide I have done my Lost Soldiers Letter, Sumdog, and Blog Commenting, I hope you like it so here it is. Thank you.

 

Helen's Question Poem W7T1.

Hi here is my Question Poem and here it is I have done this for our topic for heroes I hope you like it Thanks.

LOLLIES!

Hi guys here is me and my friends work and we have wrote about Lollies. It is on a presentation.

Tiger Snapshot.

Here is a story my story about a tiger and it is a snapshot. I will like to share it with you.

Tiger Snapshot

Writing Goal Sheets.

Hi this is my my Writing Goal Sheets and I am going to share it to use and you can look at it and here it is I hope you like it.

Letter to persuade my mum.

To Mum.

Dear mum, today my General said that I had to stay at the the front line for 5 or 8 years because I  never took care of my platoan. I was just looking after myself but my friend Jadaleigh sometimes looks after me when I get shot by bullets flying everywhere.  After 8 years my friend was talking to me about her family because she was crying when lots of shells were flying down the sky. My friend died everyone was crying when we were coming back home, and the platoan were giving her lots of wreaths and flowers.

                       From Helen Tanoai.

                     

  

This is an different Cinquina about Sniper's I hope you will leave a comment.
                                                     
                                                      Thanks for reading.