WALT: write a narrative with these things in it: Grammar, Spelling and Punctuation.
Today I am going to blog my Narrative Writing it is called: An Unblessed Day. It was about nme having no voice for my mum's birthday and I thought I made her day bad. Here it is.
An Unblessed Day:
Introduction:
This morning you woke up without a sound. What if it is a special day? Overnight something happened and you can only communicate non - verbally. How would you feel? How would your day be without a voice? You try to yell your loudest but you get frustrated. You keep on trying and trying until you give up.
Paragraph 1:
On a special day it was my mum’s birthday. I ran down stairs woke up my mum and said “ HAPPY BIR…” Suddenly came out. I was getting frustrated and I was going crazy trying to let my whole soul out but I couldn’t. It was not a special day anymore, my mum was worried. So I went back to bed.
Paragraph 2:
I felt angry that I let my mum down and I felt disappointed in myself because I couldn’t make the day better. I was crying and crying until my mum came in, I was worried that I could of made her angry and disappointed too. I was scared that my mum would ask too many question and I wouldn’t answer it. She came in “Ummm, are you sleeping?, I was wondering why you couldn’t talk when you woke me up?.” I went to my bag and got my book and pencil, I wrote down “I don’t know what happened to me overnight” my mum answered “ Ok, why don’t you stay in bed and have a rest for a while,we will see what will happens, I will bring your breakfast too.”
Paragraph 3:
This time I felt like I wanted to take someone else's voice so I could talk to my mum. I thought that I was making her day unspecial now. Since that day I was struggling and struggling trying to let any of my voice come out until… “NOTHING CAME OUT”. So I went to bed and prayed that I would get my voice back tomorrow.
Conclusion: The next day my voice came back I was blessed to have it back. So me and my mum went out to celebrate her BIRTHDAY today.
